Ball and Chain

Ball and Chain - Ch 4 - Page 27

November 29th, 2014, 10:36 pm

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Reply super_chi, November 29th, 2014, 10:36 pm

Dahlia is unaware of Roddy’s third eye. She is a rather absent parent, and Roddy wants to keep his ability to “disappear” a secret. Roddy’s power will be explained more clearly as the story progresses.

And this concludes Chapter 4! :D All I need to do is put together the back cover for the book, and then it’s off to the printer. I am probably going to put together a Kickstarter campaign to help me fund the printing of Chapter 4.

Chapter 5 will start soon enough - I still need to work on the script. The story will shift focus to Dorioth and Vee. It will also star a very creepy character that I’ve been dying to introduce!

Stay tuned, and thank you for reading! :)

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User's Comments:

Reply Dr. Giggles, November 30th, 2014, 12:16 pm

Is it okay to say that I actually sort of jumped when I saw Roddy's third eye? One moment I'm waiting for it to load and then BAM there he is... and then he's gone.

Can't wait to read more.

Reply super_chi, December 1st, 2014, 1:59 pm

@Dr. Giggles: I'm happy to hear your reaction, lol. Surprise was the intended effect! :)

Reply Rakanarshi, December 2nd, 2014, 1:08 am

Whoa, three eyes and he can turn invisible, that is so cool! Wonder if he will meet up with tadpole, they look about the same age lol. Man This will be fun to speculate on :)

Hang on! he isn't invisible...he...disappeared!...whoa can he teleport? man.

Reply MadMindInk, March 26th, 2016, 5:44 am

woah dude! intense way to end a chapter!

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